The lyric vid: just about perfect, nothing is jumping around, the font is legible yet not goddamn ugly.
The lyrics: yeah right, starting a song out with that sort of grammar blunder is so metal it hurts; and it’s not the only spot that makes me kinda fume. It’s 2017. You can learn English for free online. You can ask your native speaker friends to go through your lyrics and your pronunciation. Elisa, I love your voice, but this sloppy attitude to your working language is so 1992 it’s unforgivable. Makes me irrationally want to butcher some Spanish in return.
The music: flower/prog is what Elisa’s Hamka has always been about, but JB’s drums… supposing these are actual drums and not a sequencer… dude, either lose the triggers or use better samples. Or do something to your tracks when mixing.
But of course, the focal point is Elisa’s voice. And there’s no denying she’s one of the best metal vocalists ever.
Those drums, though, now talk about distracting.